LO4 - Games Corner Script Feedback

22/04/15 - Below is evidence of the e-mails sent to gain feedback. This first image shows the e-mail I sent to teammate Matt and my tutor with the probing questions for Vicky Kilby. I did not have Vicky's e-mail address so I wasn't capable to send the e-mail to her myself.
Beneath that is the e-mail Matt sent to Vicky including our script and questions.

6/5/15 - In today's session I will be recieving feedback from Games Corner host Vicky Kilby on the Games Corner news script we prepared. She will answer the five preared questions about the script. Her feedback will be voice recorded and I will also note down key points from the feedback for teammate Matt Poole, who is unable to attend this session due to an exam he is taking part in at the same time.

Below is the feedback we recieved from Vicky Kilby in responce to our questions.

Below are the notes taken when receiving feedback.

Below is the recorded conversation that took place when we were given our feedback.

 https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=w8enb3jO9sU


How we will Respond to Feedback

Improvements to be made: -
*We must make sure that the amount of speech by each host is an equal amount to the other host. For this we will provide Jordan with some more dialogue to match Vicky.

*We need more variety in the content of the video game news stories. We will include other news stories, other than just game releases, such as video game related events, game developers and new game technology. We will also be including stories that are both local and international.

*We will create a more relaxed and informal approach to the show by including more informal and comical dialogue, such as the dialogue used towards the end of the original script.